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…………在线修改英语作文Dear Cathy,I heard your family are busy and your children are great.That's good.But I really worry your children's health.I think you ... -
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******3965邓鸣 Martin Murray is a fifteen-year-old boy. His father died one year ago. After his father was dead, his life became difficult. His mother had to work hard, and she couldn't remain / stay at home often . So, Martin Murray felt alone. His mother told him to pay...
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英语作文求批改
******3965邓鸣 People should work hard to be more useful. An early catches ( the ) worms, in order to catch the worms one should be work hard. We will be a starter (不明白??) by studying harder. It is important to be a hardworking person. We will get what we ...
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******3965邓鸣 Today is International Working Women's Day.I want to give my mother a surprise.I do housework without telling to her.What can I do ?I Open the window and keep the room for ventilation.Then I put the clothes in the wardrobe,and make the bed,...
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******3965邓鸣In 20th century, an individual girl shocked the world with her bravery. She was the girl who lived in the darkness but brought people the light.When I read <Three Days To See>for the first time, I felt in love with the book and began to wonder why a ...
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英语作文修改
******3965邓鸣 Life likes weather.(生活应该像天气,不应该像天空)It may be sunny or rainy sometimes,but it will never be continuing for a long time.So how can we do when we are in trouble ande how to deal with it First,when you find you have made a mistake....
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******3965邓鸣 Now many of my classmates like to surf the Internet in their free time.I think Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages.For example,if I have some trouble studying, I can surf the internet to find more helpful information. And I can make ...
